Feedback

- Liked the short pace of our clips, costumes and the random elements in our video.
- The group suggested that we use a 'man thong' image of the two running for our Digi pack. Or the three posing against the graffiti background.
- Thought the lip syncing could have been better, agreed that it was hard to do and thought we managed to successfully divert attention towards our other clips.

Final Video

Final idea for magazine cover

We've decided that we're going to stick with the idea of the John Lennon and Yoko Ono on the bed in our man thongs and gold masks.

What needs to go on the magazine cover

Photograph to cover page

Star ratings and reviews from well known magazines

Out when(date)

Myspace of band

Where to buy from ( logo of itunes, amazon etc)

Record label logo, website

Name of artist and song

Date of shooting- monday 23rd nov

Digipak ideas

Magazine advert

Needs to promote video and artist

Magazine

Name of artist

Name of album (featuring the track BPC)

Release date

Available from

Websites/myspace

Record Label

Reviews and ratings

DVD

Showcase the artist

Collectors item

Limited edition

Features-Out-takes, Documentary, making of, live, bonus tracks, uncut version, short films featuring artist, photographs

Rating-parental advise

Tuesday 10th

We've uploaded our footage, and made a good start into the editing of our video. The clips we got seem to fit really well, creating a better feel to the video that really grabs the viewers attention with lots of short effective shots. Overall we are happy with our progress.

Monday 9th

We've filmed our final footage, and we feel it went quite successfully. We managed to get the clips that we needed, including footage that grasps other groups feedback.

Magazine Advert Research

For our Magazine Cover we've decided to stick with the man thong idea but mix it in with a famous image. The shot will be on a bed or carpet with Liam laying on the floor and callum laying next to him curled up with his body wrapped around him whilst kissing him on the cheek. We'll be wearing the gold masks and man thongs that we sported rather well in the Music video. The genereal Idea of the shoot is to re-create the John Lennon and Yoko Ono famous image from the cover of Rolling Stone magazine



The lighting in the original photo is quite dark and grainy but we're thinking of making it a brighter photo to help represent the way we want our video to be seen.

Analysis of Peer Feedback

Overall we're pretty happy with the feedback to our Rough-Cut, We have taken into account the criticisms and plan to change them with our upcoming footage E.g Shaking Moo, and other extended shots that dampen the fast pace to our piece.

Shots we plan to change:
- 00:09, Garage walk (too long)
- 00:20, Rojiar verse 1 lip sync
- 00:23, Gareth verse1 lip sync
- 00:55, Liam verse 2 lip sync
- 1:07, 'BPC' (too long, put in close-ups)
- 1:31, Cut down Slow-mo Boxing (Rojiar)
- 1:48, Take out 2nd wheelie bin shot
- 1:59, Edit ShakinMoo Dance Scene

Group 04 Artist Representation

You have a lot of close ups of the group. It gives the impression of rebellious people in the same way that similar bands behave, such as madness.

Suits the song in that you are having fun and don't really care what anyone thinks.

Needs more of some shots and less of others. For example there is a bit too much dancing in shakin moo's and we thought it would be better to have more of the ball games as that was really funny.

Feedback from group 05

Used a good selection of different locations, and added lots of humor to it. maybe shorten some off the length of the clips. the yrics relate to the song by having the word drink then including cans of beer in the vidoe.

Peer Review

The music had an upbeat punky feel to it and the video fitted this very well with scenes of rebellion and youthful behavior. The visuals definitely compliment the song well. The lip-syncing could be improved but overall the video is very strong.

Feedback general

genre and characteristics
- Stuck to genre, Drinking, messing around
- close up shots, hand-held shots captures the punk attitude
- locations stuck to the genre, eg, graffiti in car park etc
- shooting material appropriate to task.
- abnormal yet funny behavior, riding on the top of cars, jumping in rivers, nudity

Video Roughcut

Rough Cut Feedback - TAW

You footage is pretty faithful to the look you had planned for. There is a lot going on and you have shot lots of scenes that work together to make the video playful and exciting. However somehow it still feels a little slow. Shots are often on the screen for a little to long and it feels like I am waiting for something to happen. In my view you need to cut the scenes together a little quicker and aim to have more close up lip syncing on screen to carry the song - where this happens in the shopping trolley and in the car are the most exciting parts of the video. This is also because the camera is moving.