Rough Cut Feedback - TAW

You footage is pretty faithful to the look you had planned for. There is a lot going on and you have shot lots of scenes that work together to make the video playful and exciting. However somehow it still feels a little slow. Shots are often on the screen for a little to long and it feels like I am waiting for something to happen. In my view you need to cut the scenes together a little quicker and aim to have more close up lip syncing on screen to carry the song - where this happens in the shopping trolley and in the car are the most exciting parts of the video. This is also because the camera is moving.